Improve your sales funnel copy for the best possible results

Get it critiqued by a health and fitness copywriter with a proven track record

Health and fitness entrepreneurs who are currently rolling out their sales funnel.

I have an important question for you: Is your sales funnel copy achieving the highest possible conversion rate? 

In other words, are you absolutely certain you've leveraged every tactic, optimized every (head)line and used every psychological trigger at your disposal?

If the answer is not a resounding YES, I've got an offer for you that will be hard to refuse.

Give me 48 hours, and I'll review your entire sales funnel copy meticulously. 

You’ll receive a comprehensive video critique, alongside a Google Doc filled with actionable improvement suggestions. 

You can then implement my advice to quickly and easily improve your sales funnel copy. 

This will ensure it achieves the best possible results. 

What’s also great? 

This offer comes at absolutely no risk to you. 

Because if the value you got from my copy critique service didn’t pay itself back AT LEAST 10x over… 

You pay nothing. 

Think about that offer for a second. 

If you’re like most health and fitness entrepreneurs, you’ve probably invested a ton of time, money and effort into your sales funnel.

We're talking dozens of hours. 

And thousands upon thousands of dollars. 

You’re probably also planning on investing (or have already invested) a substantial amount of money into running paid ads. 

Now, with such a huge investment of resources… 

Doesn’t it make sense to get a fresh perspective on your sales copy? 

More specifically, the perspective of a proven sales copywriter who has directly generated over $500,000 in sales for his clients.

All of which are health/fitness entrepreneurs like yourself? 

And wouldn’t it give you more peace of mind knowing you’ve done everything you possibly can to: 

  • Optimize your sales funnel copy for maximum results 
  • Avoid unnecessarily wasting money on running ads that don’t bring maximum results. 

I’d think so. 

Especially when you consider my copy critique service comes at a low price: Just $350 - $750, depending on the size of your funnel. 

Let's say you're conservatively aiming for your sales funnel to generate at least $75,000 - $100,000 in revenue.

When you compare this to the investment, the cost is minuscule—practically a drop in the bucket.

JUST ONE piece of useful advice will most likely pay your investment back.

And I plan to leave 0 stone unturned: expect to receive a laundry list of recommendations. 

Imagine having a seasoned sales copywriter - one with over six years of experience - by your side. 

Picture this expert dissecting your sales funnel copy with surgical precision, identifying weaknesses you didn’t know existed. 

And giving you clear and actionable advice on how to improve it to make it as: 

  • Compelling 
  • Persuasive 
  • And actionable as possible

That's what my copy critique service will do for you. 

What you gain from my copy critique service 

  • A fresh perspective on your sales copy: Even the most skilled copywriters will benefit from a sales copy critique. Being too close to your work makes it hard to see potential improvements or subtle flaws. I’ll bring a fresh perspective and identify opportunities for improvement you might have missed. 
  • Fast turnaround: Within 48 hours of accepting your project, you’ll receive a detailed critique of your entire sales funnel with a list of easy-to-implement changes. 
  • Actionable advice: All of the recommendations are summarized, making it as easy as possible to improve the sales copy.
  • Peace of mind: You'll feel at ease knowing you've done everything possible to optimize your sales copy for maximum results. 
  • Optimized sales copy: Ensure your sales funnel copy is optimized for the best possible results. 

How my copy critique service works 

Submit your sales copy: Share your sales copy and customer avatar or description of your ideal customer with me. I’ll send you a quote based on the work required. 

Receive your sales-copy critique: Within 48 hours of accepting your project, you'll get a Loom video and Google Doc link with detailed feedback and actionable advice. 

Implement changes: You can use the summarized Google Doc file to easily make the changes to your sales copy. This ensures it’s primed for maximum conversions. 

Satisfaction guaranteed: If you feel like my sales-copy critique service didn’t pay itself back at least 10x over, contact me for a full refund.

What to do next 

Look, you’ve invested a ton of resources into your sales funnel. 

Don’t you think you owe it to yourself to ensure it delivers the best possible results?

Since my copy critique service comes with a satisfaction guarantee there’s absolutely no risk to you.

And the sooner you reach out to me, the sooner you can optimize your sales funnel.

That’s why I encourage you not to postpone and reach out to me now.

You can do that by clicking here and filling in my contact form.

I’ll get back to you ASAP.


P.S. Don’t want me to critique your entire sales funnel? Instead, want me to critique a single (underperforming) sales page, VSL, or core-email sequence? Contact me for the options.